徐小平
范例10.1 提要
申请者概况
女性，在一家著名外企做总经理秘书，工作四五年去美国读MBA，全自费，一年学费一万七千多美元，拒签三次
拒签理由
中国人不可能负担得起这么多钱爸爸作为政府官员不可能有这么多钱，否则就是腐败95％的中国学生都不回来，你也不会回来你还不如去其他国家学习呢，比如澳大利亚或加拿大
申诉重点
中国人有穷有富。第一个理由以偏概全，是不合理的我爸爸的钱来路明确，中国有腐败并不证明我爸爸也腐败这里签证官的错误还是以偏概全，不合情，不合理，不公平其他中国学生不回来是其他人的错误，我反正是要回来的以这个理由拒签，还是以偏概全的错误，是不对的。不要以其他人的罪过来惩罚我身为美国签证官，为什么推广其他国家的教育事业因为签证官心情不好就说不负责任的话，做不负责任的面试决定，是不对的这是签证官的重大原则错误
范例10.2 原文
Dear Visa Officer ,
My application for a student visa was rejected by your officers. The following is a fewreasons for my refusal given by the visa officer at my second interview. I consider thatthese reasons for rejection are completely not fair.
l. The visa officer said: "Chinese people can not afford so much money" (For the$ 17,566 that my father will provide me for my MBA program).
2. The visa officer said : my father ,as a government employee ,can not possibly have e-nough money to provide me with financial support my study in the United States ,un-less he is corrupted and must have received bribery.
3. The visa officer said ; because "95 % of Chinese student didn't come back" ,thereforeI will not come back either.
4. The visa officer also said : "you can go to Australia, Canada and other countries foryour education" ,after I said that I want to pursue my advanced education in the Unit-ed States.
I have the following arguments against the visa officer's reasons for his refusal:
1. Chinese People. The visa officer has ignored the great economic growth that has en-riched so many Chinese people. Chinese people in general are still poor but a greatnumber of them are very rich and can afford such an amount of money (according tostatistics, about six million Chinese people are millionaires). Rejecting my visa cannot be based on the fact that Chinese people in general are poor NOR should a visaofficer grant my visa on the basis of that there are six million millionaires existing inChina. The visa officer should have given a personalized interview to my specificcircumstance in which I do have enough money available to pursue my MBA degreein the United States.
My Father. As the Vice President to Jiangdong Telecommunications Designing In-stitute ,as well as a well-known specialist in the Chinese booming telecommunicationindustry ,my father has made quite a fortune by providing such international corpo-rations with professional consulting services as Motorola , Ericsson , and NEC. He isthe first people these companies are looking for when they went to Jiangdong to de-velop their business ,an island that witnesses great development in the telecommuni-cations industry.
